Hey guys looking for feedback and any mistakes on a small writing prompt that someone wrote for me. August 1st, 1876. One century after the United States signed the Declaration of Independence, Colorado was admitted into Union as the 38th state. What many people didn’t realize until many years later, was the beauty of this magnificent state. It is filled with mountains, rivers, lakes, and so much more. The days began with a beautiful sunrise and ended with an equally beautiful sunset. The winters were full of snow and the summers full with life. This is why I chose to make this beautiful state my home, at the age of thirty three. My family and I moved to a small town called Aspen. For the first few years it was amazing. In the winter my family and I would go snowboarding, and in the summer we would take long walks in the beautiful mountains. But it wasn’t like this forever. In February of 1995, my wife was struck with cancer. The doctors said she was not going to make it and to prepare for her death. With great sorrow, I made preparations. Since I could no longer afford our house, I got ready to sell it. My wife got her will in order and she began to make peace with herself as she fought her inevitable fate. Family was always coming over to bring us food and comfort. My wife died in August of 1995. With heavy hearts, we sold the house and made way for Vail to start a new life. This town was similar to Aspen, but was filled with new people and new beginnings. I decided to write a book, wanting a new hobby to take my mind off my wife. I had always been a decent writer, but my wife dying brought new light to writing. I spent hours tucked in my office working on my book. In one of the rare moments that I was out, I met someone. We met at a coffee shop, when she came up to me and introduced herself. She said her name was Isabel and asked me about my life. We talked for hours that day about my life and hers. We soon began to meet every Saturday at this small coffee shop. She would listen to my life story and then I would listen to hers. Every weekday I would work on my book, excited to see her on Saturday. Soon we started dating. It was then that I truly started to heal. A year later we decided to get married. Our marriage was one of the happiest days of my life and at that moment I knew that my life was filled with many more pleasant days. I completed my book just months after. The book is called Passing of The Dead. In this book I talk of all the hardships in my life. I talk of the sorrow my dead wife brought me. Of the gaping hole she left in me with her death. But then I talk about healing. How Isabel showed me to make the hole smaller. How she showed me to fill the sorrowful hole of her death with the memories of our past. In the last chapter of the book I move on to one final, important lesson that I learned. This last chapter is all about finding optimism and being hopeful for a better future. I was lucky when I decided to move to Vail. I was lucky when Isabel came up to me that day. Because of my hope and optimism, I let Isabel in my life. And my life has once again returned into a state of happiness, a state that I thought I would never see again. So I come here today, asking all of you one favor. Next time you feel that you are in pain, do not dwell in your sorrows. Do not only think of the painand dwell in it. Instead, think of all the happy memories before the pain. Be hopeful and optimistic of a better future. Because one day, you will look back on your moments of sorrow and be thankful. Thankful that you experienced everything. Because those experiences are the hands that mold you. And if you dwell in the pain, it will mold you into a lesser person than if you had not done so and instead been optimistic and hopeful.

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Answer 1
now miss girl- who finna read all that ????? like puh-lease
Answer 2
I think it is a great story
Um for the criteria it was very clear and descriptive um I think it is just me but when the narrator said you moved in with your family I thought you meant mom and dad so when you said you had a WifeI got a bit confused but overall great story

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paper was invented by the Chinese into active voice

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Answer:

The Chinese invented paper

Explanation:

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Lady Macbeth's behavior and her sleepwalking episodes suggest that she is

Question 14 options:

a loyal supporter of all her husband's actions.


mentally unstable and riddled with guilt.

charming and friendly in her role as queen.

attempting to fool the doctor and the gentlewoman.

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B that right for sure

Lady Macbeth's behavior and her sleepwalking episodes suggest that she is mentally unstable and riddled with guilt. Hence, Option B is the correct statement.

What does the sleepwalking of Lady Macbeth suggest?

Lady Macbeth's sleepwalking indicates the misery and mental ache she is in. Since she needs Macbeth to kill harmless people, she will become stressed from guilt.

Lady Macbeth's behavior and her sleepwalking episodes suggest that she is mentally unstable and riddled with guilt. Hence, Option B is the correct statement.

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Do you play musical instruments?
If yes, what do you play and why?

If no what would you like to play and why?

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Answer:

Trumpet, and piano

Explanation:

I was in band for 5 years and played trumpet.

I love the way the piano sounds and started playing anime openings for myself and composed some arrangements of my own.

hi pepl i is 9 `how do me multiky

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Explanation: you add the number however times the number ex 2 x 2

2 + 2 = 4

Answer: ya

Explanation: um so 9+9=18

Can someone give me a Limerick Poem please

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Answer:

There was an Old Man with a beard, Who said, 'It is just as I feared! Two Owls and a Hen, Four Larks and a Wren, Have all built their nests in my beard!

Explanation:

Answer:

Its good

Explanation:

People protest about the cruelty of keeping animals in captivity, but they seem happy enough to eat meat, keep pets and visit zoos. All animals should be free!’

Write an article for a magazine in which you explain your point of view on this

statement. (40 mark)

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Answer:

When you say that people protest about the cruelty of keeping animals in captivity but they still eat meat and visit zoos, it is the same as saying that people love animals as pets (dogs, cats) but keep eating animals. Nevertheless, I understand that stoping eating meat is a personal decision and not everyone wants to do it. However, I think it is hypocrital, but I also think that judging people who "loves animals but still eats meat" is not the way. We, as people who love animals, should ecourage everyone to stop eating meat at least a few times a week and share the benefits of it. Judging just sends the wrong message.

Explanation:

To complete this exercise, you have to write about your point of view on the quote given. I gave my personal opinion as a person who doesn't eat meat but still understand why people is a little hypocrital when it comes to animals. It's important to decide what your possition is before writing so your ideas are clearer when you start writing.

PLEASE HELP!! What figure of speech does
Wharton use in the passage
below from Paragraph 43 of
April Showers?
She bent her head under the
coming storm of his derision.
A. metaphor -- the comparison of two
unlike things
B. simile -- two unlike things are
compared using "like" or "as"
C. personification -- an object or idea is
given human-like qualities

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C? Storms can’t be derisive unless they’re people-like all of a sudden

Answer: A

it be Metaphor

Explanation:

endangered, vulnerable, dormant, at risk, threatened, severely endangered, dormant.

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Could you please explain what you’re asking better so I can help you ?

Reread line 66-96 in the excerpt from "Arachne and Minerva" (source 1) and view the painting "Minerva and Arachne" (source 3).



(RL.3.7) What is emphasized in the painting that is absent in the text?
a. Minerva’s pity for Arachne


b. Arachne’s attempt to hang herself


c. Arachne’s fear of Minerva’s punishment


d. Minerva’s envious attitude towards Arachne’s abilities

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D. I believe it is.

Answer: d

Explanation:because i said so

WHAT IS THE VALUE FOR 7-6+5?

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Answer:

6

Explanation:

7--6 is 1.

then you add 5,

you get 6

Thouxanbanfauni new album goes hard.
True
False

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True ?????????????????

please help me with english.

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Answer:

A

Explanation:

Answer:

perhaps b

Explanation:

13) How do the last two lines of the poem reveal the difference between the speaker's perception of Richard Cory and Richard Cory's own feelings about himself?

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Answer:

The speaker shows Richard as someone admirable and that everyone envied, but the last two lines, show that Richard did not support his own existence and had very strong internal conflicts in relation to himself.

Explanation:

The poem "Richard Cory" features a speaker who admires Richard and shows how all people can not not envy him, where he bakes. That's because Richard is handsome, rich, well educated, discreet and has everything he wants. However, the last two lines of the poem state that "And Richard Cory, one calm summer night, / Went home and put a bullet through his head." This shows that although people believed that Richard had a perfect life, he had no peace and could not endure his own existence.

Help plssssssssss!!!!!
Choose the right form.
1.There has been a snowstorm in the mountains. The roads couldn't/might not be
passable.
2.We should call Tim before going to his house; he couldn't/might not be there.
3.Unfortunately, James and Michelle have already made plans, so they couldn't/might
not come with us to the exhibition at the Museum of Contemporary Art.
4.Eve wants to go to the ballet, but she couldn't/might not be able to get time off that
evening.
5.The video is gone. Doug must take/must not have taken/must have taken it.
5.Susan couldn U/might not hear the speaker because the crowd was cheering so
loudly..
7. Jerry couldn't/might not be angry at me. I've never done anything to upset him.​

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Answer:

1.There has been a snowstorm in the mountains. The roads might not be passable.

2.We should call Tim before going to his house; he might not be there.

3.Unfortunately, James and Michelle have already made plans, so they couldn't come with us to the exhibition at the Museum of Contemporary Art.

4.Eve wants to go to the ballet, but she might not be able to get time off that evening.

5.The video is gone. Doug must have taken it.

6.Susan couldn´t hear the speaker because the crowd was cheering so loudly.

7. Jerry couldn't be angry at me. I've never done anything to upset him.​

Explanation:

"Can/Could" and "May/Might/Must" are Auxiliary Verbs. "Could" is the past form of the verb "can" and is used to describe an ability from the past and to express something that is a possibility. "Might" is the past form of "may" and is used to express something possible in the present. "Must" is used to describe something necessary or very likely.

How can a journalist be sure to avoid conflicts of interest?

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Include preventing or eliminating situations, such as the following: any applicable member of the organization who owns or has a financial interest in a competing company where that individual might be influenced to make a business decision not in the best interest .

Answer:

Journalists need to refuse gifts, favors, fees, free travel, special treatment, or anything else that might call their honesty into question. If a journalist is assigned a story that focuses on a business or community member with which they have a relationship with, that journalist needs to come clean and ask to be reassigned.

Explanation:

Which of the following sentences uses a metaphor?
"Hours, days, and months are the rags of time."
"I'm so hungry I could eat a horse."
"Swift, like some fierce bird of prey."
"Dark as the caves wherein earth's thunders groan."

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I think it’s hours, days and months are the rags of time

#2: Write a SHORT story (8-10 sentences) that teaches the lesson "Sometimes in life what seems to be a weakness turns out to be a person's greatest strength"--think children's books, fables, fairy tales, etc.

thank you

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Kylie strolled across the school sidewalk. Everyone in her family always thought she talked to much. But Kylie wasn't sure not how to. There was so much about the world that was great to talk about. Today was the talent show. Kylie decided to join just because her older brother dared her, Kylie's brother, Kyle, hated her, he knew everyone would just hate her more after she wasted their time with her random act, because watching the talent show wasn't mandatory. Kylie walked into the cafeteria and got ready for her turn to show her talent, she slowly walked up the stage as it was her turn. Kylie had written a speech about the school, as she read it a loud, it lifted everyone's spirits, because the speech was great! Kylie found that, even though she talked a lot and enjoyed much, she can use it to make the world a better place.

Based on paragraph 1, the reader can infer or predict that the speaker will
А)
continue to question and be aware of his situation,
B)
accept his situation and be a good worker.
C)
learn to read and write.
D)
become the head slave.

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Any ideas for a hook for an essay about standing up for others?

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Answer:

I reamber i stood up to bully for other people because they were to scared to

Explanation:

just carry on to that owo

Answer:

Every day, you will see things that are unjust or maybe you don’t feel is right. You as a person are given a voice for a reason. Not only for you but also for the people around you too.

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Read this excerpt from "Are Dogs Dum?" from Karen Hopkin.

Norton Milgram and his coworkers at the University of Toronto at Scarborough use treats to give dogs a Canine IQ test. The dog is presented with a tray with a blue block on it; underneath the block is a treat. The animal moves the block and gets the treat. So far, so good. Now the test gets tricky. The dog is presented with the same tray, but this time it has both a blue block and a yellow coffee can lid (or white bowl or black square of cloth) on it; the treat is now under the yellow lid (or white bowl, etc.). The test: how long does it take for the dog to learn that the treat is always under the new item on the tray? The smarter the dog, the quicker she'll find the treat.

Which detail from the text best supports the inference that the dog smells the treat?


"The animal moves the block and gets the treat."


"The smarter the dog, the quicker she'll find the treat."


"…this time it has both a blue block and a yellow coffee can lid (or white bowl or black square of cloth) on it."


"The dog is presented with a tray with a blue block on it; underneath the block is a treat."

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Answer:

The first choice

Change the affirmative present simple sentences to negative ones. Select the word(s) you wish to change and write new text.

1
We play basketball in the park.

2
Laura and Mark study at university.

3
We have breakfast in the dining room.

4
Adrian walks to school in the mornings.

5
My mum works all day.

6
Jack gets up at 7am on school days.

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1. we do not play basketball on the park
2. Laura and mark do not study at university
3.we do not have breakfast in the dining room
4. Adrian does not walk to school in the mornings
5.my mom does not work all day
6. jake doesn’t get up at 7am on school days

Spelling . A. Student is optimistic rather than pessimistic about a situation

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Answer:

Explanation:

A. Student is optimistic rather than pessimistic about a situation.

There are no red lines anywhere. Every word is correctly spelled.

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Here's the passage, not long!: Long-term Monitoring of the Hudson River by American Museum of Natural History.

QUESTION: One question that scientists have not yet answered is what caused the number of large zebra mussels to decline. How might tracking different parts of the ecosystem over a long time help scientists to answer this question?

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Answer:

Hudson river have a different climate and is not inhabitable by zebra was said by scientist in the 90s.It might be because of increasing water pollution in the Hudson river as their are channels from the cities which meet the river

If this is wrong then don't worry scientist are there to find the reasons

Explanation:

Part B: Which TWO phrases from the text best support the answers to
Part A? The most dangerous game

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Answer:

A and c

Explanation:

4. Which statement captures the author's point of view in the text?


A. Edward Bernays' ideas of public relations should be
incorporated into all organizations.

B. Edward Bernays' work should not be replicated because it had
damaging effects on people.

C. Companies and governments should follow a moral code when
replicating Edward Bernays' ideas.

D. People need to be conscious consumers to avoid being misled
by organizations replicating Edward Bernays' work.

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I believe it is letter d

Answer:

Either B or C

Explanation:

honestly none of the answers make much sense to me but according to one of the comments, the answer is C

PLEASE HURRY!!!!!

Read the following excerpt from Mateo’s speech to the school district on its snow day policy. When Mateo delivered the speech, he made sure to use many expressive hand gestures, a casual tone, and a varying pace.

“Our district’s current snow day policy was designed to balance the safety of students and teachers with the need to prevent disruptions to learning. However, the policy does not take into account the modern realities of the classroom. Our overly cautious policy calls for no more than five snow days per school year, with a preference for late-start over total cancellation. With online textbooks and lectures available to us, however, we can stay home without disrupting learning—so why maintain such strict limits?”
Which of the following statements BEST evaluates his delivery?

A.
A more casual tone was appropriate for the speech’s content and audience.
B.
A faster pace would have been more appropriate for the speech’s content and audience.
C.
The expressive hand gestures were appropriate for the speech’s content and audience.
D.
A professional tone would have been more appropriate for the speech’s content and audience.

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Answer:

B.  A faster pace would have been more appropriate for the speech’s content and audience.

Explanation:

Mateo is speaking to the audience and refers to the audience as US indicating he is talking to fellow students about the injustice of the strict snow days.

Children are more likely to get bored listening to a talker with a professional tone or if the speaker is being more casual then the audience would think the speech is not important allowing the audience to miss the speech before it has even begun.

But by making the speech faster you are allowing the audience to begin to believe on their own about the injustice and it begins to work up their blood pressure.

Hitler was very good at getting the people to believe in what he wished because he made his speeches short and fast.

Answer:

the answer is D actually

Explanation:

Find the preposition: The presents are hidden in the trunk.

1. are

2. in

3. the

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In ans the
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ughhh someone write my argumentative essay for me i am DEAD INSIDE

this is mostly a joke but if you really want to, wink wink, these are the requirements or whatever.

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Answer:

okay so this is just a joke right? we'll leave you to it.

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Which of the following is the best synonym for vigilance? a. attentiveness b. fear c. fatigue d. carelessness​

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Answer:

The best synonym for vigilance is a. attentiveness.

Explanation:

Vigilance is the action or state of keeping careful watch for possible danger or difficulties, and attentiveness is the action of paying close attention to something. Since they both are about paying attention and watching carefully, attentiveness would be the best synonym for vigilance.

You just got a job working for the Bill Gates Foundation. You were given 20 billion dollars to save the world. How would you do it? What would you invest this money into? (you may not have it/give it to yourself) think of things, people, places, etc. give a breakdown of your plan. plz lmk

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Answer:

Donate all of it to the GOP, in order to saved America from the socialists.

Explanation:

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