Any errors/suggestions? (Also Rate it please)

Any Errors/suggestions? (Also Rate It Please)

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Answer 1

Answer:

i think its pretty good 10/10

Explanation:

however you refer to small children as it i think you should say they or them

Answer 2

Answer:you put a period before and. Don’t do that. Also go into more detail

Explanation:


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Help please! Reorder the sentence parts to state parts the ideas more clearly.

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Concentrate better, learn more, and are used to studying, in that order. Hope it helps! :)
are used to studying
will learn more
will concentrate better

here is the summary

Characters: •Chloe Garfinkle

•Donovan Curtis

•Mr. Osborn

•Dr. Schultz

•Abigail Lee

•Noah Youkilis

•The Daniels

•Katie Patterson

•Brad Patterson

•Ms. Bevelaqua

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Answer:

how do you want me to answer this?

Explanation:

What's the best ANTONYM (the word or phrase most nearly the same)
5. PROFUSE bleeding
a. steady b. excessive c. slight d. occasional e. necessary

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Answer:

B. excessive

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Explanation:

b is the most similar word to profuse

Which of the following is an example of figurative language
1.fly:to glide through the air2.fly:to die and go to heaven3.fly: an insect.

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Answer:

1

Explanation:

cus that is figurative language

Answer:

2

Explanation:

Fly to die and go tk heaven

25 Points! Just copy + paste the dictionary definitions of each next to each word. It's for spelling and I need the dictionary definitions.


forbidden:

fortunate:

friendship:

furthermore:

gasoline:

glimpse:

grief:

guarantee:

guidance:

hardship:

harmony:

hasten:

heir:

hesitant:

humane:

hundredth:

hydroelectric:

ignore:

illegible:

illogical:

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Answer:

forbidden banned

fortunate someone that has good luck (unlike me)

friendship the emotions in being a friend

furthermore to proceed

gasoline a fine petroleum

glimpse a small visual of something for a short period of time

grief to be upset about something for a long period of time

guarantee it is true

guidance needing to be guided or to be guided

hardship something hard to do with no sympathy

harmony to go good with someone or music reference

to be quick with something

heir someone entitled to something  

hesitant to be slower and think before you go

humane showing  compassion sometimes in groups

hundredth a number in ascending order

hydroelectric  a dam or reservoir  

ignore to not pay attention

illegible not clear enough to read

illogical lacking sensible knowledge  

1). Running Home and “The Sailor” are written from different points of view. Write an essay analyzing the impact of point of view on events in the passage from Running Home and the impact of point of view on events in the poem, “The Sailor.” Use specific examples from BOTH texts to support your answer.

Can you turn this prompt into a question? And no you don't need the story's..

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Answer:

As a writer, you must strategically choose the point of view that allows you to most effectively develop your characters and tell your story. First-Person Point of View When the author uses the pronouns "I," "me," "myself," "we," or "mine" to narrate a story, this piece of fiction is using the first-person point of view.

Explanation:

Read the paragraph from the section "Taste The Beef."

"We don't know how it ended up as it did and we are investigating," Mars said.

Why does the author include this paragraph in the article?


to further highlight that even the company is unsure of why the candy was on its way to become cattle feed


to introduce the idea that someone at the company is confused by the circumstances of the spill


to suggest that the company will take over the investigation started by Dodge County Sheriff Dale Schmidt


to imply that the company does not understand why the discarded candy was supposed to be destroyed

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Answer:

to further highlight that even the company is unsure of why the candy was on its way to become cattle feed

Explanation:

I know this is way late, but why not

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Answer:

Explanation:

hi

Answer:

wut do you mean?

Explanation:

Which statement uses a transition to signal a shift in the frame? PLZ HELP RN :(

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Answer:

A

Explanation:

C I hope you get this right

how did the weather in tiger rising affect rob

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Answer:

Explanation:

The weather in "Tiger Rising" affected rob by that Rob learned to overcome his fear.
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Answer:

Who said "I have a dream"

What is Colin's secret?


Colin knows where the secret garden is.


Colin is a Rajah from India.


Colin can command the servants to do anything he wishes them to.


Colin knows that everyone believes he will not live to grow up.

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first one “colin knows where the secret garden is”
Colin knows where the secret garden is.

Why is a scion a symbol for Paul in Tangerine?

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Answer:

his glasses symbolize his ability to see the truth better than most people. They also remind us of the event that gave him this insight into the behavior of those around him.

Explanation:

QUESTION: Describe the geography of the location for the kid nation

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Answer: I hope I understood the question right, but-

Explanation:

The show, featuring 40 children aged 8 to 15, was filmed on location at the Bonanza Creek Movie Ranch, a privately owned town built on the ruins of Bonanza City, New Mexico, 8 miles south of Santa Fe.

If you could start a charity or organization for kids, what would it be? Why do you feel this would be useful? What kind of things would your charity/organization do? Please write in a 7 sentence paragraph.

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Answer:

If I could, it would to help fund children's nonprofit hospital, we would take donations and sell them. We would then donate the money. How would we get out the word? We would post ads online, we would also ask schools if we could teach about charity, along with advertising ours. We would try to get partners. How would this be useful? Well, more kids would be getting what they need to feel better. I think this would be effective, kids could give and buy while the money goes toward a good cause.

Which are characteristics of a good topic sentence? Check all that apply.

It is concise.
It is general.
It states the paper’s thesis.
It expresses the main idea of the paragraph.
It supports the main idea of the paper.
It is specific enough for one paragraph.
It is in the form of a question.

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Answer:

It is concise.

It expresses the main idea of the paragraph.

It supports the main idea of the paper.

Explanation:

It is concise the first choice

What type of service does Goodall’s mother set up for the local people?

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Her mother, Margaret Myfanwe Joseph, was a secretary who later became an author, writing under the name Vanne Morris-Goodall. if that helps

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The correct answer are

1. c

2. a

3. b

4. c

5.  I don't know

What is the most important theme of the Native American version of Cinderella?

a. Betrayal ends relationships forever.

b. The best way to avoid danger is to be invisible.

c. If your life is difficult, expect a reward.

d. Honesty is always the best policy.

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Answer:

D. Honesty is always the best policy

Explanation:

Answer:

Honesty is always the best policy.

Explanation:

Think of a time where you read a poem, play, or story, and then watched the film version of it. Write a paragraph about the main similarities and differences you noticed between the versions of the story.(4 points)
pls help

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Answer:

Answer below

Explanation:

I will answer in short bullet points so you can develop your own ideas

- Film has more sound and visual effects to engage the reader

- Film is the shortened version of the story, play, poem, etc so it is more concise

- Film adds plots eg romance to make it more interesting

- The basic storyline is similar

- The main idea is similar

- The characters are similar except that some characters are added

what does too mean select all correct answer

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Answer:

Too is an adverb that can mean “excessively” or “also.” Just to be clear: two is pronounced the same as to and too, but it can't be used instead of either of them because it's a number.

Answer:

too means....

Explanation:

1. to a higher degree than is desirable, permissible, or possible; excessively.

"he was driving too fast"

2. in addition; also.

"is he coming too?"

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Answer:

108

Explanation:

cut the irregular shape and it becomes 2 rectangles. 8x6=48 and 10x6=60. add them together to get 108.

anyone who knows this please help

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B .. it’s the only educated choice in the list
The answer is B. B the best choice

To Autumn
by John Keats

Season of mists and mellow fruitfulness,
Close bosom-friend of the maturing sun;
Conspiring with him how to load and bless
With fruit the vines that round the thatch-eves run;
To bend with apples the moss'd cottage-trees,
And fill all fruit with ripeness to the core;
To swell the gourd, and plump the hazel shells
With a sweet kernel; to set budding more,
And still more, later flowers for the bees,
Until they think warm days will never cease,
For summer has o'er-brimm'd their clammy cells.


Who hath not seen thee oft amid thy store?
Sometimes whoever seeks abroad may find
Thee sitting careless on a granary floor,
Thy hair soft-lifted by the winnowing wind;
Or on a half-reap'd furrow sound asleep,
Drows'd with the fume of poppies, while thy hook
Spares the next swath and all its twined flowers:
And sometimes like a gleaner thou dost keep
Steady thy laden head across a brook;
Or by a cyder-press, with patient look,
Thou watchest the last oozings hours by hours.


Where are the songs of spring? Ay, Where are they?
Think not of them, thou hast thy music too,—
While barred clouds bloom the soft-dying day,
And touch the stubble-plains with rosy hue;
Then in a wailful choir the small gnats mourn
Among the river sallows, borne aloft
Or sinking as the light wind lives or dies;
And full-grown lambs loud bleat from hilly bourn;
Hedge-crickets sing; and now with treble soft
The red-breast whistles from a garden-croft;
And gathering swallows twitter in the skies.

Question 1
Part A

What inference can be drawn from "To Autumn"?


Autumn is a beautiful season, but spring is much preferred.

Autumn is a peaceful and abundant season, full of natural beauty.

Autumn is a sad season, and the autumn of life is equally sad.

Autumn is simply a precursor to winter, and the autumn of life is a time of grief.
Question 2
Part B

Which evidence from the text best supports the answer in Part A?


"Where are the songs of spring? Ay, where are they?
Think not of them, thou hast thy music too,—"

"And sometimes like a gleaner thou dost keep
Steady thy laden head across a brook; . . .
Thou watchest the last oozings hours by hours."

"Then in a wailful choir the small gnats mourn
Among the river sallows, borne aloft
Or sinking as the light wind lives or dies;"

"Season of mists and mellow fruitfulness . . .
Conspiring . . . how to load and bless
With fruit the vines . . .
And fill all fruit with ripeness to the core."

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Answer:

Part A: Autumn is a peaceful and abundant season, full of natural beauty.

Part B: "Season of mists and mellow fruitfulness . . .

Conspiring . . . how to load and bless

With fruit the vines . . .

And fill all fruit with ripeness to the core."

20 POINTS - GRADE 8 SPELLING SENTENCE MAKING

1. Create 5 sentences using 3 list words in one sentence. Bold the list words you have chosen.

2. Create 5 sentences using 2 list words in one sentence. Bold the list words you have chosen.

List words for 1 and 2:


forbidden
fortunate
friendship
furthermore
gasoline
glimpse
grief
guarantee
guidance
hardship
harmony
hasten
heir
hesitant
humane
hundredth
hydroelectric
ignore
illegible
illogical

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Answer:

1:The forbidden gates of the houses opened very slowly.  2:I was very fortunate to find this money today. 3:My friendship is very special to me. 4:Furthermore into the tour we will see a very old truck ! 5:I can guarantee this is a fun project.     1:i was very hesitant to retake my test for the hundredth time. 2:furthermore into our friendship we became closer.  3:I ignored my friend while she talked about the field trip I was hesitant about going to. 4: As I took a glimpse at the picture i had a wave  of grief. 5: My mom said that I am forbidden to touch the gasoline pump

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3. If you were a character in this Act, what advice would you give Romeo? Be sure
to include evidence from the play about what decisions or relationship problems
you are addressing. Write this in the form of a letter.

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(Como não falou o ato, posso somente deduzir) Olha, não tenho certeza, mas eu já li o livro:

Caríssimo Romeu,

  Não se afogue em lágrimas por um improvável amor, procuras tu a razão: Não podes tu querer casar com uma família antagônica à tua. Mas se fores mesmo perdido de amor, posso-lhe fazer algo. Volte à minha residência, que lhe quero falar. Enviarei a ti um mensageiro. Não faças nada hediondo, não fiques desatinado, não sejas teu próprio carrasco. Não faças nada com fúnebres corolários

                                        Teu amigo e conselheiro,

      Frei Lourenço

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What evidence is there that Romeo and Juliet experience love at first sight?

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Shakespeare shows their attraction when they first lay eyes on each other at the Capulet ball by having Romeo express his admiration for Juliet's beauty as better than any other he's seen, and vice versa. It is true that both feel they have fallen in love.

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Read the passage from the following website: www.growingnation.org

President Thomas Jefferson believed that for Americans to be virtuous and free, they needed to farm land. He wanted to expand westward to create more farmland. Jefferson also wanted to obtain the Port of New Orleans at the mouth of the Mississippi River so farmers could easily transport their goods. He facilitated the purchase of New Orleans and the rest of the French territory from France in 1803 for $15 million. This new land was called the Louisiana Territory and stretched partway across the continent. It was the first step in expanding the United States. The purchase of the Louisiana Territory led to a pattern of westward expansion through payment, negotiations, and conflict.

Read the passage from the website: www.expandingcountries.edu/unitedstates/louisianapurchase

The Louisiana Purchase doubled the size of the United States and vastly increased its resources and riches. The roles of the president and the Constitution were also defined, as it was determined that the president could purchase the land without consulting Congress. Despite the advantages of expanding westward, one prominent disadvantage was the growing tension between slave states and free states regarding whether new states would permit slavery. The opportunity to grow a nation would endanger its very survival during the Civil War.

Which of the following text based responses correctly answers the following question: How did the Louisiana purchase benefit the United States? Use both texts to find the best response.

a
Pioneers began to farm the new land or use other natural resources. Some of these people used the Mississippi River and the Port of New Orleans to ship their products. This purchase clarified the Constitution, increased riches, and led to buying more land.

b
President Thomas Jefferson believed that for Americans to be virtuous and free, they needed to farm land. He also wanted to obtain the Port of New Orleans at the mouth of the Mississippi River, so farmers could transport their goods. The Louisiana Purchase doubled the size of the United States and vastly increased its resources and riches. The roles of the president and the Constitution were also defined, as it was determined that the president could purchase the land without consulting Congress.

c
The Louisiana Purchase benefited the United States because it led to westward expansion, secure waterways, and a stronger nation. Pioneers began to farm the land or use the natural resources. Some of these people used the Mississippi River and the Port of New Orleans to ship their products. This purchase clarified the Constitution, increased riches, and led to buying more land. By strengthening the country, securing waterways, and expanding westward, the Louisiana purchase benefited the U.S.

d
The Louisiana Purchase involved the United States paying France $15 million for their territory. Americans moved into the new land and began to farm. They lived virtuous lives full of hard work and determination. The purchase doubled the size of the United States.

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Answer:

c

Explanation:

d

The Louisiana Purchase benefited the United States because it led to westward expansion, secure waterways, and a stronger nation.

Who is President Thomas?

Pioneers started farming the area and using the resources. Some of these people shipped their goods through the Port of New Orleans and the Mississippi River.

This purchase created wealth, defined the Constitution, and made it possible to purchase more land. The U.S. gained from the Louisiana purchase by fortifying the nation, controlling waterways, and extending westward.

As the third president of the United States from 1801 to 1809, Thomas Jefferson was an American leader, diplomat, lawyer, architect, philosopher, and Founding Father.  

Therefore, The Louisiana Purchase benefited the United States because it led to westward expansion, secure waterways, and a stronger nation.

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The Long Walk to Freedom

Think #1 Use details from the first paragraph to explain the social and political changes that have taken place in South Africa since the 1990s.

South Africa has had a long and challenging history. Things started to change both politically and socially in the 1990's. This is because ________________________ (author, year, paragraph #). There are several examples of these changes. One example of social change has been _________________________________ (author, year, paragraph #). Another example of social change has been seen in ________________________________ (author, year, paragraph #). Social change has not been the only area to see a difference as the politics in South Afica also changed. One example of this is _______________________________(author, year, paragraph #). A second political change has been ______________________________(author, year, paragraph #). Today there are still issues in South Africa, but they have made great strides forward since the 1990's.


Think #2 Write two or three sentences explaining Mandela’s point of view about courage and his reaction to fear. Support your answer with evidence from paragraph 4.


Nelson Mandela had a lot of time to collect his thoughts while he was wrongly imprisoned in South Africa. In the excerpt from A Long Walk Home, Mandela shares his views on courage and fear. He writes that courage is ______________________________ (author, year, paragraph). He best explains it as __________________________ (author, year, paragraph). Mandela also writes about fear. He say, " _____ (author, year, paragraph)".


Think #3 Refer to multiple details to explain Mandela’s view of a person’s “twin obligations” - both from ideas that are directly stated in paragraph 7 and from ideas you have inferred from clues in the text.


In the excerpt by Nelson Mandela he wrote about having "twin obligations". The reader can infer this to mean ______________________ based on the evidence from context clues that discusses _____________________________ (author, year, paragraph #). Mandela states the following about twin obligations, "___________________________________" (author, year, paragraph #).


Think #4 Use context clues and word relationships to determine the meaning of the word resiliency as it is used in paragraph 4 of Long Walk to Freedom. Write your definition of resiliency and tell how you determined its meaning.


Based on the text and context clues, the definition of resiliency means ______________________________ (author, year, paragraph #). The context clues in the text that support this definition are, "____________________________ (author, year, paragraph #)".


Think #5 By recalling that the Latin prefix trans- means “across” or “to change completely” and that the suffixation means “act or process,” use the context clues provided in paragraph 5 to determine the meaning of transformation. Write your definition of transformation here and tell how you figured out its meaning.


From the root meaning of "trans" (across or to change completely) and the suffix "ation" meaning act of process the word transformation in paragraph 5 is defined as _______________________. The context clues in the text support the definition where it states, "________________________ (author, year, paragraph)".

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I wish I could but my god that’s a lot

The social changes that were brought by the sacrifice of black activists and Nelson Mandela were:

An end to apartheidEquality of the black man in South AfricaEqual representation, etc

What is a Social Change?

This refers to the different changes which are brought about in a given society as there is a move from one way of doing things to another.

Hence, we can see that through the efforts of Nelson Mandela and thousands of other black activists in South Africa, they were able to defeat apartheid which was discriminatory and abusive towards blacks in South Africa.

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