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Search up:CNN 10 April 5th
Watch the video.
Then give me 10 facts

Side note:Please don’t use up
my points and just put some
Random answer.

Please and thank you!

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Answer:

In 1995, amazon started out by only selling books.

Ama zon sells most stuff you can buy at a mall, but just online.

Jeff Bezos is the richest man on the planet.

Privacy advocates have campaigned to Am azon, about not having enough privacy.

Dilip Kumar is apart of the amazon grab and go.

Amaz on relies on their associates, to get things done.

They started off small with just books, and their patience paid off.

Predatory pricing has been tried to be proven by GOvernment, but their sales keep going up so its been impossible.

Their company follows the saying "winner takes all"

Their taking away from other companies, like face book etc. that were there before them.... but they don't care because winner takes all they say.

Explanation:

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Why does the narrator include descriptions of different types of men? (RL. 2.5)

You are going to fill in the blanks with the appropriate words that would

make sense why he included the different men.

No options given, one word per blank.

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against dying, despite their

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type your answer...

his stance against giving up on living.

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Answer:

to show that not everyone is different and to go into more detail on explain your answer when identifying each man

Which literary element provides the best clue that a story is historical fiction?
A. Characters
B. Plot
C. Setting
D. Theme

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Setting
But all the others can as well

Answer:

Characters would be the answer because the Characters would be based off of imaginary people or real individuals. Therefore you can see if this is a historical fiction. Setting would work too because you can see what is taking place.

When she discusses Obama in the first paragraph, the author's tone is best described as?

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Answer:

I would need the excerpt to answer this question.

The author's tone is largely critical as she discusses Obama in the first paragraph.

What is a critical statement?

A critical statement entails an analysed and detailed examination of someone's ideas, work, tenure etc.

Henve, the author's tone is seen as largely critical as she discusses Obama in the first paragraph where she discussed about Obama policies during his administration.

Read more about critical statement

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Describe types of academic course?

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Answer:

The main types of academic programs offered at U.S. colleges and universities are certificate, undergraduate and graduate programs. Important Facts About Academic Programs Admission Requirements.

Which sentence is a simple sentence?
а
b
Mom ate cheese, bacon, lettuce, and strawberries in her salad.
The baby ate after her mom.
The lion was eating while we were watching it.
I went to the park because it was boring at home.
C С IS D CORRECT??

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Answer:

Yes D is correct :)

Explanation:

Life

Friendship

Brainstorm at least two metaphors that you can use to compare the two.

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Answer:

Explanation:

Friendship/friend is a rose/flower, if you care for them and treat them with respect they will give you happiness and cheering up in return/when you need it

Life can be like a whisper, there are secrets out there that you wont know untill you see it in person, and face it.. which allows you to focus on the future.

Which sentence uses the word venture correctly? The boy decided to venture out into the forest on his own. The car had a faulty venture that needed repair. I never venture the computer outside for fear of breaking it. He was feeling venture as he bravely stepped up to sing.

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Answer: The boy decided to venture out into the forest on his own.

Explanation:

Venture has multiple meanings, one if which is to go on a journey that isn't really safe. The other refers to establishing a business which usually has some risk attached to it.

In the first option, the word venture was used appropriately as it describes the fact that the boy in question had gone on a journey (however short), a trip that has some sort of risk attached to it as forests can be dangerous.

Answer:

The person above me is right. The answer is A

Explanation:

Data from a survey:


A. can include only descriptions of things because survey questions are open-end.

B. can be qualitative or quantitative, depending on the question asked.

C. will always be quantitative because you can't get quantitative data from a survey.

D. well be only numbers base because surveys have to be multiple choice ​

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Answer:

B. can be qualitative or quantitative, depending on the question asked.

Explanation:

In Statistics, sampling can be defined as a process used to collect or select data (objects, observations, or individuals) from a larger statistical population using specific procedures.

There are various types of sampling used by researchers and these are;

1. Random sampling.

2. Systematic sampling.

3. Stratified sampling.

4. Cluster sampling.

5. Opportunity or convenience sampling.

Data from a survey can be qualitative or quantitative, depending on the question asked.

Part A

What is a theme of William Tell?


To make change happen, one must be willing to take risks.

Too much pride can be dangerous.

The mind can play tricks on a person.

It is possible to change from bad to good.
Question 2
Part B

How is the theme identified in Part A developed in the play?


Tell places his own life and that of his son in danger when he chooses to take a stand and not to honor the cap.

Tell asks for his son to be blindfolded so that he does not fear that Tell is trying to hurt him intentionally.

Gessler is so impressed with Tell’s skills as an archer that he honors his word and allows Tell and his son to go free.

Gessler is so focused on forcing Tell to do what he says that he doesn’t realize Tell is prepared to shoot him.


Which word best completes the sentence?

Select the word from the drop-down menu.

The Choose... formed a secret plan with her partner.
Agent
conductor
conspirator
operator
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Answer:

Part A To make change happen, one must be willing to take risks

Part B Tell places his own life and that of his son in danger when he chooses to take a stand and not to honor the cap.

Answer:

Part A To make change happen, one must be willing to take risks

Part B Tell places his own life and that of his son in danger when he chooses to take a stand and not to honor the cap.

Explanation:

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Select the correct answer.
Which sentence best expresses a theme of "Barnacles?
OA. The past can keep a person from making progress.
OB. Moving against the tide can be difficult and lonely.
Ос. Learning from past experiences is the only way to move forward.
OD
It is important to maintain one's possessions in good condition.

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Answer:  The past can keep a person from making progress.

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Answer:

A

Explanation:

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Please write your own example TASS thesis.
U HAVE TO HAVE
Third Person

Arguable

Specific

Supportable


EX) California should create a law that bans all cigarette sales because smoking is harmful to everyone's health.
Third Person, Arguable, Specific , Supportable

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Answer:

Distance learning is hard because (point a) there is less in-person contact with teachers and other students, (point b) students have to manage themselves all the time, and (point c) students have more access to their phone and computer at any given time, which means more students choose to mess around instead of paying attention in school.

Explanation:

about why  Distance learning is hard

Read this excerpt from News Articles about Bullying.

One of those contacts came in the form of Dash Mihok, an actor who has had roles in major films, including "I Am Legend," and "The Thin Red Line." Mihok, 38, also has Tourette's syndrome.

"I grew up with Tourette's in New York City public schools and I was just amazed at the bravery and the fortitude of this young man," Mihok said. "I sent him an email letting him know he had a friend in Los Angeles and his mother asked me to be his mentor. I happily accepted."

Together, Jaylen and Mihok have been taking their knowledge into the Polk County school system, holding assemblies to educate students on bullying.

What background knowledge would best add to a reader’s understanding of the excerpt?


Tourette’s syndrome affects the brain and nervous system, causing people to have uncontrollable movements and speech.
Dash Mihok played a number of small roles before starring in movies, making him appreciate his success in films.
Polk County Schools represent a large district in Florida, making it necessary for them to engage in anti-bullying efforts.
Jaylen’s mother was very happy that Mihok had befriended her son, so she asked Mihok to become a mentor to Jaylen.

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Answer:

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Answer: A

Explanation:

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Why is it so important to discuss female leadership?

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When women become leaders, they bring skills, different perspectives, and structural and cultural differences which ultimately drive effective solutions to the companies occupied by men

DESCRIBE SOMEONE WHO LOOKS BORED WITHOUT USING THE WORDS BORED, YAWNED, STARED OR SIGHED.​

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Answer:

Genevieve slumped back into her seat, looking at the window and longing for the freedom that was stolen from her during school.

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In which country would women be most likely to have more rights?
Australia
Saudi Arabia
Iran
China

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The correct answer is Option A) Australia

Australia is seen as a developed economy with guaranteed social freedoms for everyone.

This is not true for the other countries in the options available.

For example in China, women as recently as last year could not give birth to more than one baby. Women who were pregnant with another baby were forced to undergo abortions.

In Iran, women are forced to wear the Hijab when outside of their homes and in Saudi Arabia, women could not even drive a car until last month.

Even still, China, Iran and Saudi Arabia are known for numerous Human rights abuses. There are large scale cracks downs on freedom of speech and civil liberties.

Australia is the complete opposite of all these countries.

Hope this helped!

Answer:

It's A

Explanation:

I have taken the test

Look around you and write down about someone you know that you think will be a memorable character in a play. Write down details about this person, as you would when you write a play.

Does this character give you an idea for the plot of a one act play? If yes, what would the plot for your play be? If no, why not?

pls help me!

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Answer:

Mailman

Explanation:

Mailman comes everyday to delivery mails. He drives a USPS van and wears a USPS uniform. He is a good worker as he works whether it is raining or cold outside.

The idea for a plot is that he always rings the bell twice. Not once, not thrice but always twice. I notice that one day and get curious. I find out that there is a reason he is doing it.

It sounds like an interesting investigative play.

Answer:

Old man next door

Explanation:

old man lives next door. hes retired n spends lots of time in his yard clearing weeds. other times he watches TV. he dresses like someone from the 50s n talks the same too.

he may be a memorable character in an old fashion play but i just think he is a boring old man.

absorb
wholly
immerse
irrelevant
disorient
To see how many Critical Vocabulary words you already know, use
them to complete these sentences.
1. Waking up in the middle of the night can
someone.
2. While traveling in Spain, Becca tried to
local customs.
3. The committee ignored Raul's objections to the new regulations,
calling them
to the discussion.
4. Jonathan would
himself in his notes to study for tests.
5. She dedicated her time
to learning to play guitar.
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Answer:

1. Waking up in the middle of the night can disorient someone.

2. While traveling in Spain, Becca tried to absorb local customs.

3. The committee ignored Raul's objections to the new regulations, calling them irrelevant to the discussion.

4. Jonathan would immerse himself in his notes to study for tests.

5. She wholly dedicated her time to learning to play guitar.

Explanation:


6. My dog________ a hole in the rug.

1)choose
2)chews
3)non of the above​

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Answer:

3) None of the above

Explanation:

it should be chew

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(1)
Excerpt from Pieces of the Past
Erin Sullivan
Nate slammed the garage door shut with a loud bang-hopefully loud enough for Granddad to hear from inside the house. Nate
was angry, angry at his parents for abandoning him at this house during his long vacation, angry for having to spend a beautiful
sunny day clearing out a dark and damp garage.
2 The dusty garage once housed vehicles, but over time it became cramped with Granddad's possessions. Tightly packed boxes,
bags, and trunks were stacked to the ceiling.
This story MOST LIKELY takes place during the
A)
fall
B)
spring
C)
summer
D)
winter

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Answer:

The story most likely takes place in the summer. the answer is C.

Answer: Summer, ez

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Which two details about life in ancient Greece did the author use to shape the character cares ?
1. Chares's recklessness and impulsive behavior
2. Chares as a member of a wealthy Thebes family
3. Chares's affection for an Athenian
4. Chares's size and physical strength
5. Chares contempt for philosophers and poets​

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Answer:

Chares contempt for philosophers and poets​

Chares as a member of a wealthy Thebes family

Explanation:

Got it correct!

The inference is that the details about life in ancient Greece that the author use to shape that the character cares include:

Chares as a member of a wealthy Thebes family Chares contempt for philosophers and poets

What is an inference?

It should be noted that an inference simply means the conclusion that can be reduced based on the information given in a literary work.

In this case, Chares as a member of a wealthy Thebes family and Chares contempt for philosophers and poets were vital in shaping the character.

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Write, agree or disagree after each statement then write a sentence or two about why you agree or disagree. If you don’t know which side you are on explain why you cannot decide.

People who do cruel things can still be good people.

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Agree. People who do cruel things can still be cruel people. Sometimes, it is hard to change. But a person may have been going through tough times and they are taking their anger out the wrong way in which they think is healthy, or be peer pressured by others to do those bad things. But overall, even if people do cruel things, they have chances to change and be a good person whether it starts big or small.

1. Which best summarizes the scene from Flowers for Algernon? *
a. Dr. Strauss and Burt marvel at Charlie's progress as they listen to Charlie's work
notes.
b. Charlie shares his excitement about the experiment and the progress he has made.
c. Dr. Strauss instructs Burt to hire another stenographer in order to keep up with
Charlie.
d. Burt and Charlie talk about how Algernon behaves and what that means for Charlie.

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Honey oozed from the jar. The honey was sticky.

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Answer:

whats the question

Explanation:

Answer:

You can clean it? Honey is nice...

Which of these explains when context clues are helpful?
A. When you can't pronounce certain words
B. When you can't remember what you've read
C. When you don't know every word in a passage
D. When you've missed important ideas in a passage

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Answer:

I'm pretty sure it's C.

Explanation:

It's helpful to look for context clues when you don't know the meaning of a new word.

Hmmmmmm I think it’s C

What satirical purpose does the reference to the Emperor's speeches on mercy serve?
Gulliver's
Travels
by
Jonathan
Swift
( (excerpt)
On It shows good speeches being celebrated without regard to the intent of their speakers
OB. It reveals the low moral standards of subjects in relation to their rulers,
Cit exposes the hypocrisy of rulers who obscure their brutality with meaningless words
OD It shows the need to impart justice without regard for mercy and without prejudice
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as observed that the more
insisted on the more
nd the sufferer more
it confess, having never been

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Answer:

A. It shows good speeches being celebrated without regard to the intent of their speakers

Explanation:

According to the excerpt from Gulliver's

Travels by Jonathan Swift, the speech given by the Emperor is highlighted and it is shown that because of the eloquence of his words, the people celebrate it without grasping the full meaning and implications of it on their lives.

Therefore, the satirical purpose the reference to the Emperor's speeches on mercy serve is

P. S: Satire is the use of humour, irony or exaggeration to make fun of, or ridicule the absurdity of people or their vices.

Choose the adjective in the following sentence: The students
stood in front of the ice cream truck, waiting their turn to
order.​

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Answer:

ice cream

Explanation:

it describes the truck

Explain whether the Broadside depicts the Bostonians
favorable or unfavorably (positively or negatively).
Support your answer with evidence from the

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Answer:B

Explanation:Poop

Trash Management

(1) Every day, people discard something or the other in garbage cans. (2) According to recent data, Americans throw trash that can fill 63,000 trucks every day. (3) How will humans be able to manage so much trash at this rate? (4) And, do people ever spare even a second from 86400 seconds of a day to think where all this garbage goes?
(5) Managing trash is assuming serious threats today, and the turnover of the garbage is estimated to increase three times by the end of the century.
(6) Trash is managed in different ways. (7) Some of it is buried, some of it is thrown into dumping grounds, while some of it is burned. (8) But all these methods create other issues. (9) Burying and dumping trash can only be done up to an extent after which the garbage starts piling and starts spreading diseases. (10) While burning trash may get rid of it instantly, the smoke that it creates, in turn, pollutes the air.
(11) It is a good idea to use and reuse things to reduce waste so that we do not face issues with trash management in the future. (12) For example, cookie jars and tins could be reused to store pulses, lentils, flour, or spices. (13) Most importantly, each one should develop the habit of donating books, clothes, and toys to those in need and not throw them in the trash.
(14) Everyone's primary aim should be to reduce waste, which in turn will lift the pressure of managing it.

John wrote an informational paper for an assignment. Which two revisions of sentence 5 better address an audience of his peers?

A. Trash needs to be controlled and managed, in order to prevent critical issues near the end of the century.

B. Managing trash is difficult now, and the amount of trash is going to increase severely in the future.

C. Trash management is a serious problem, which is expected to triple by the end of the century.

D. Managing trash is a significant problem in our world today, and soon, there will be entirely too much trash to deal with.

E. Managing trash presents serious issues for everyone concerned, and imagine the situation when the problem increases tenfold.

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Answer:

I think it is A

Explanation:

Answer:

A and B

Explanation:

What would make a blog post about a rare Egyptian musical instrument easier to understand?

A.
including a picture of the instrument
B.
using technical language to describe its sound
C.
describing when and how the instrument first came into use
D.
providing the lyrics to an Egyptian song commonly sung when the instrument is played

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Answer:

The answer is A. including a picture of the instrument.

Explanation:

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Answer:

its a

Explanation:

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