Can you revise my paragraph

Can You Revise My Paragraph

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Answer 1

Answer: you should take out the part about the dog but overall it good

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Answer 2

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You need to look over your punctuation in the first line. In the first line, Instead of  "while there" I would put " while attending". Instead of "she", I would put "Nesbit"

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Select all that apply.

The purpose of transition words that begin new paragraphs is _____.

coherence
variety
to tie one paragraph to another

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Answer:

is the ortografí un the spanis

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the logic is logic

answer: to tie one paragraph to aanother, coherence (a and c)

explanation: when something has coherence, all of its parts fit together well. an argument with coherence is logical and complete, same for an essay. transition words are also used to not confuse the reader i guess. instead of making a new paragraph (similar to the one you just wrote about) you can use a transition word to connect them. sorry if my explanation is a bit off but i'm sure you can find better understandings elsewhere. hope i helped out a bit. good luck on your work.


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A mother. A birth giver. She carried me and held me close. A bond that still lasts till today. Her hands held me gently the day I took my first breath. She guided me with each step.

The beauty of her loving heart. The easy grace in her style. She fills my heart with joy and love. Surrounding me with her precious arms.

She's a wonderful gift to me. My strong devotion each day. Inspiring me with her courage. A hand in my hand. A breath of fresh air along the way.

Whose love can equal the love of a mother. Her heart, soul and mind is pure and lovely, shining bright towards me.

She is the reason why I am me.

hope this helped! :)

Helen Grey
By Christina Georgina Rossetti
Because one loves you Helen Grey
Is that a reason you should pout
And like a March wind vee about
And frown and say your shrewish say?
Dont strain the cord until it snaps
Dont split the sound heart with your wedge
Dont cut your fingers with the edge
Of your keen wit you may perhaps
Because you're handsome, Helen Grey
is that a reason to be proud?
Your eyes are bold your laugh is loud,
Your steps go mincing on their way
But so you miss that modest charm
Which is the surest charm of all
Take heed, you yet may trip and fall
And no mancare to stretch his arm
Stoop from your cold height, Helen Grey
Come down, and take a lower place
Come down, to fill it now with grace
Come down you must perforce some day:
For years connot be kept at bay.
And fading years will make you old.
Then in their turn will men seem cold.
When you yourself are nipped and grey

Which text from "Helen Grey explicitly describes Helen's behavior?

A.Your steps go mincing on their way
B.Take heed you yet may trip and fall
C. And fading years will make you old
D.Then in their turn wil men seem cald

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im pretty sure its c dont come at me if its wrong

write a summary about Filipino values using the checklist as your guide​

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Your learning of the Filipino culture and tradition is not complete without knowing about the common Filipino values. These values are important because it reflects the personality of Filipinos, which you may adapt as you live in the country longer. To help you out, here are some guides on the common values you should know here in the Philippines

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Answer:

i wish i would have gotten 10 points but thats okay

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Rewrite the sentence so that it has a parallel structure.
The cross old neighbor, attracted by Shiro's barking, had been an unseen and
enviously witness of the finding of the treasure.

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The cross old neighbor, attracted by Shiro's barking, had been an unseen and (an) envious witness of the finding of the treasure.

personal reflection night chapter 6-7

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Answer:

6-7= 1

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Cause and effect the skin I’m in

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I think you forgot to add a picture!!

The war in Japan ended before the war in Europe. True or False

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Answer:

true

Explanation:

i know

Do you think Interpersonal Skills could be valuable in multiple contexts outside of work and school?(add a example after you answer)

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Yes, and here's why.

When you have a personal connection with someone, you are more easily capable of saying it in a way they can understand. It also allows better understanding when trying to get a sincere message across to someone. The reason for this is simple, so that people can feel more comfortable when you are explaining something to someone. When you give someone the kind of understanding that they are looking for, it makes them more likely to open up and tell you what you wish to know, or how they like the advice you give. Keeping a balance of understanding, is key to not only making friends, but also to giving good advice and explaining concepts.

Hope this helps and have a nice day!

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Lincoln subtly addressed his audience is a possible rejection of his ideas. Examine the evidence he presents. In 15 to 300 words, Discuss if he uses ethos, pathos, or logos, and in what way could this put the objections of his audience to rest?

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Lincoln's Gettysburg address is considered as one of the most influential speeches in the history of the United States of America. It occurred 4 and a half months after the Union defeated The Confederacy in the Civil War.
In this speech, Lincoln clearly makes a stance on his position regarding slavery, stating that the United States was a nation "conceived in liberty and dedicated to the proposition that all men were created equal.
Lincoln focuses on Pathos. A technique used to appeal to the peoples´ emotions. During his speech, he mentions all of the soldiers who died during the wars up until now and urges the people to honor them by pursuing the goal of a nation where all men are free, regardless of their origins.

4. What steps can we take to ensure that we can leave a better world for future generations ?

Help !!

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All thoughts, suggestions and ideas in Leaving the World a Better Place for Future Generations are 100% my own. Our children are our future and their future depends on us. Not just in the everyday sense – feed them, clothe them, etc., but in the things we do now, how we live and operate in our local communities and how we take care of our world. Find out what you can do to help make a difference in our environment every day. Whether you're at home, on the go, in the office, or at school, there are many opportunities to go green by Reducing, Reusing, and Recycling. The best place to start making a difference is right in your own home.

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I did a writing on this

How does dickens portray cruelty in a Christmas carol

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- Scrooge describes the poor as ‘idle’ this means that he thinks that the disadvantaged (poor) are lazy. Even tho most people like the Cratchits are hardworking

3. Which word best describes the mood of the selection at the beginning?

A. excitement

B. anticipation

C. disappointment

D. fear

This is the story one Friday morning

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Answer and Explanation:

Hello. Although you have informed the text to which this question refers, you have not informed the specific part of the text to which you are asking and referring, which makes it impossible to answer that question in a specific way.

However, when it comes to "One Friday Morning" we can consider disappointment as the climate of history as a whole. That's because in these stories we are introduced to a black girl who was prevented from following her dreams and had her talent reneged and devalued because society was racist. In this way, the reader is disappointed by a very promising young black woman who was prevented from pursuing the goals she had.

The story is about a girl who was discriminated against in her school because she was black. The correct option is C:-disappointment

Describes the mood of the selection at the beginning?

"One Friday Morning" we can consider disappointment as the climate as a whole. That's because in these stories we are introduced to a black girl who was prevented from following her dreams and had her talent reneged and devalued.

For more information about One Friday Morning, refer to the link:-

https://brainly.com/question/26477955

2. Which expression is equal to 5.783?

5,783 × 103

57.83 × 10

5,783 , 102

57.83 , 10

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Answer:

57.83×10

Explanation:

because i subtract the two number between factors

What should be included in your thesis statement?​

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Your thesis statement should be specific—it should cover only what you will discuss in your paper and should be supported with specific evidence. 3. The thesis statement usually appears at the end of the first paragraph of a paper.

Explanation:

Answer:

topics

Explanation:

it has to be more than one because the topics will be your main subjects for your body paragraphs

Please refer to the chart below.

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Events of September 11, 2001


(All events EDT and am)




8:45 AA flight 11 strikes the north tower of the WTC


9:03 UA flight 175 hits the south tower


9:43 AA flight 77 hits the Pentagon


10:05 The south tower collapses


10:10 UA flight 93 crashes in Pennsylvania


10:28 The north tower collapses




If you live on the west coast and it is a 3 hour time difference (earlier on west coast) from New York, what time was it in California when AA flight 77 hit the Pentagon?
a.
6:43am
c.
7:43pm
b.
11:43am
d.
11:43pm


Please select the best answer from the choices provided


A
B
C
D

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D is the correct answer because I already did this

what is a rebuttal I could use for my claim?
"Racism is built into the DNA of America"

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first you can compare it to other countries which contain racism because America is not and will never be the only country with racism, there were many other countries too, actually the entire world has a history of racism, and America is one of the countries that fights racism, we allow changes to be made if we dont like how we are treated, that's why we protest.

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After reading the Martin Luther King Jr. texts "I Have A Dream" speech and "Letter from Birmingham Jail", what is one line from either of the texts that stood out to you? Why?

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One line that stood out to me was “I have a dream” because it has a deep meaning behind it.

typhoon sendong moves in what direction based on the Par?

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Answer:

Explanation:

I don't know I'm only 10 and in 5th and have high school work so


How long were they at Gleiwitz? Where did they go next?

night questions

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ok and i dont get this question explain pls

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In an argument, what is a claim?
1.an appeal to emotions and logic
2.the writer's conclusion after the argument
3.the writer's main point or thesis
4.one piece of evidence used by the writer

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3

Explanation:

Answer:

it is 3

Explanation:

i did the test and got it right



21. Lines 394-395: What does Fitzgerald foreshadow in these lines?

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Answer: That the relationship is based on looks not personality

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Define subordinate clause in your own words and give an example of one:

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introduced by a conjunction that forms part of, and is dependent on a main clause

Example:

Who is my best friend - not a question

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Help me with 3, 5 and 6 please I don’t get it !

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Answer:

3)tariffs

5)stimuli

6)crises

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please urgent please help

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1. C
2. F
3. A
4. E
5. G
6. D
7. B

What are examples of cultural assumptions that affect us as in our generation today?
e.g “boy’s don’t cry or show emotion” or “girls are materialistic and high maintenance”

I need a topic for my essay.
Thanks ;)

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Answer:

Cultural assumptions related to gender roles are still an issue to our generation today. Ideas that undermine women´s capacities and abilities are quite common. At the same time, men are considered less able to carry on activities regarded as "feminine".

Explanation:

The idea that girls are not as good as boys at maths and science is still prevalent and damaging. On the other hand, men showing emotions are usually considered weak, which becomes an obstacle for them to build healthy relationships.  

She has been playing football. (change into present simple tense).​

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She is playing football.

What do you mean by 'advice from the elders'?​

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It can be very helpful - if the older person is actually wise and sincerely wants to help you. One of the positive things about aging is accumulated wisdom, and many older people really want share what they know and be helpful. I’ve learned a lot from older people throughout my life. I really like to “pay it forward” if I can (e.g. Quora)

People learn the most from their mistakes - what better way to learn than from the mistakes of others where you can avoid the negative consequences.

Older people are not always wise, so you need to apply critical judgment. A thoughtful and truly wise older person will be able to explain the basis of what they are telling you…such as mistakes they made in learning or things they tried that didn’t work. This is a great way to evaluate their wisdom.

You also need to be receptive. It’s all too easy to hear genuinely good advice as “another story”. Listen thoughtfully and you may find some pearls.

And if you do learn something useful, provide feedback to the mentor…it will encourage them to help you in the future.

How is Newland Archer's response to Maymostclosely related to the overall theme of the excerpt?
A
Newland Archer is generally tolerant of others, but in his interaction with Ellen,
he experiences a shift in personality. The excerpt centers on his surprising
behavior
B
Newland Archer is prejudiced and intolerant of foreigners, including Ellen. The
excerpt centers on his narrow-mindedness and extremely negative behavior
towards Ellen
Newland Archer is naive when it comes to the ways of New York society, and
he is immature in his manner. The excerpt centers on his introduction to upper-
class life
9:45 AM
3/1/2021

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Answer:

It started with science and now were in the sciencen so ITS B

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